In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

To be successful in a

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, theoretical

knowledge

and practical

knowledge

are both equally important. The younger generation of some countries prefer on-the-job training rather than continuing their higher education at a university.

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there are pros and cons of

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working before getting proper theoretical

knowledge

of the

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. One advantage is that

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to become an expert in a particular profession, practical

knowledge

is a must. Because The skill of a particular work develops with more engagement with the relevant work. For an instant, a good mechanic will be produced with more and more repairs which he engaged. Because

then

only he knows the fault more accurately. Another reason is that, financial benefit.

In other words

, an early starting

carrier

will help teenagers to be financially stable with their salary. One of the main disadvantages is early starting of the

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just passed out from the colleges will lead to less theoretical awareness of the particular

subject

. As an example, before working as an accountant, engineer or any other profession, basic

knowledge

of the

subject

should be available.

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there will be a lot of errors

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occur. Another disadvantage is, that without having a good educational background, getting

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progression is difficult or it may take a long period.

For example

, to become a manager it is not sufficient to have only

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experience but a university degree. In conclusion, getting on-the-job training or getting theoretical

knowledge

is a personal preference.

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while practical

knowledge

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the skill, theoretical

knowledge

develops the understanding of the

subject

.

Therefore

both on-the-job training and university-level education are important.