In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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, theoretical

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and practical

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are both equally important. The younger generation of some countries prefer on-the-job training rather than continuing their higher education at a university.

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there are pros and cons of

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working before getting proper theoretical

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to become an expert in a particular profession, practical

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is a must. Because The skill of a particular work develops with more engagement with the relevant work. For an instant, a good mechanic will be produced with more and more repairs which he engaged. Because

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only he knows the fault more accurately. Another reason is that, financial benefit.

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, an early starting

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will help teenagers to be financially stable with their salary. One of the main disadvantages is early starting of the

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just passed out from the colleges will lead to less theoretical awareness of the particular

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. As an example, before working as an accountant, engineer or any other profession, basic

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of the

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should be available.

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there will be a lot of errors

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occur. Another disadvantage is, that without having a good educational background, getting

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progression is difficult or it may take a long period.

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, to become a manager it is not sufficient to have only

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experience but a university degree. In conclusion, getting on-the-job training or getting theoretical

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is a personal preference.

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while practical

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the skill, theoretical

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develops the understanding of the

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.

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both on-the-job training and university-level education are important.