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Although there are a lot of translation software available, learning a language could still be advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the modern world, folks tend to travel more than in the past decades. A reason is that globalization influenced being more interested in different cultures and countries. In that way, mobile applications are used by
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 to communicate with others. In stark contrast, some others prefer having classes of languages. I too totally agree with
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 my inclination are explained in trailed paragraphs. In the beginning, millennial groups are used to technology.
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, when they are in trouble, they like using their cellphones for the internet and have quickly the answer. It has been surveyed by
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 newspaper that, folks used mostly apps for almost every type of travel service because it is the fastest and the easiest.
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, learning new languages benefit
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tourist
 in the cultural and social aspect. To explain,
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 the moment when students
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in
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learning
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a new idiom, they simultaneously know about
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 and manners of the country.
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, an article from a local newspaper said that knowing the way of living and popular dialects have the advantage
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 lost in
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 foreign country.
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, having language
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classes
class
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classes
 is an advantage to
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 new cities. In summary, I think studying in
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 is amazing in order to know more about the country you want to visit and to
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speak
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speak
 clearly with the natives. I suggest if someone wants to travel it is recommended to learn about its language.
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