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computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in office everyday. Work from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employees. Do you agree or disagree ?

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In
this
 age and days, civilization around the world has pandemic covid 19.
In addition
, it is a common belief that online is important more and more for the workplace because it makes it practical for people with a sedentary lifestyle. Some people are of the view that workers should
work
 for their
company
 because of security for the
company
's property.
However
, I firmly believe that working place should be moved from
office
 to home, even though there are specific tasks that can
work
 only within the
office
.
Firstly
, I believe that some careers do not need to
work
 in the
office
.
That is
 that workers can
work
 perfectly in their house if they have a computer which has an internet connection.
For example
, most developers share their source code on clouds
such
 as Google, AWS and Microsoft azure; it can access data from anywhere.
Thus
,
that is
 why I believe it is no matter where people
work
.
Secondly
, performance would be improved by practically time management and productivity tools for a
company
.
In other words
, with advanced technology, there are very useful software programs which are productive tools
such
 as outlook, zoom, and google docs; they can share their thoughts immediately online.
For instance
, outlook helps workers manage their schedules and Google docs are able to
work
 together with workmates. In conclusion, a worker can
work
 completely their own jobs in their house for these reasons are useful productive tools and the internet connection, even though there are specific jobs which can only
work
 in an
office
.
Therefore
, a
company
 should encourage working on their house.
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