Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Elder people are in crucial need of ultimate

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whether physically or psychologically. In the UK, the government mostly bears the total

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of elderly

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rather than their

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. In my opinion, I think that the healthcare authorities have to do so in some particular conditions. In

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essay, I will demonstrate the measures that have to be taken into consideration in relation to the government’s role in paying for elderly special

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, most retirees suffer from chronic diseases, namely, diabetes, hypertension, high cholesterol levels, or even Alzheimer's.

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to the regular mental and physical

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, they will need specific medical

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. Apparently, as much as the person goes older, they become more subjected to depression, mainly because of hormonal depletion and neuron degeneration.

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, elder ones will constantly need physical and psychological

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to overcome the age-acquired brain manifestations.

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, yoga classes, community activities, and group therapies.

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, there is no doubt that in most developed countries

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are less likely to bind forever.

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, retirees hardly have to face their destinies alone. Unfortunately, the majority of ingenuous geriatrics die alone unless they are proceeding their life in a particular elder

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house.

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, I believe the health authorities have more to do than paying for the

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houses' services. Alternatively, they have

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to knock on the doors of their

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, probably through a professional team dedicated to

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task.

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dedicated group have to illustrate the situation of the grandparents in terms of sympathy not

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, trying to connect the family back together.

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, their

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might pay for the services.

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, if the elderly person has no relatives or their

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resist to afford the

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,

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the officials have to take the full

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of the health-

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services, albeit how pricey they are. To conclude, old

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do need extensive diverse

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and healthcare authorities could dedicate extra efforts to engage their

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in their ultimate well-being, not only in monetary terms but in terms of bringing

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back together.

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, the government have to bear all the expected costs for the lonely elder ones.