Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?
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time
in history to be Use synonyms
live
because, Correct your spelling
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are getting more sophisticated, and lots of new discoveries Use synonyms
has
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have
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has
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of
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entertainment.
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a good
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games
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calls
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there
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their
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people
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on
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phone
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plays
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play
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their
favorite
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favourite
time
and Use synonyms
grandparent
live with their children and tell stories to their grandchildren.
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grandparents
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today
time
to be living because there are Use synonyms
many
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much
discovery
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discoveries
and
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apply
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a very
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