IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 7.5

People in the limelight should be responsible to set a good example for others by their good behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #limelight #behavior
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
From the advent of the human ,civilization individual is being measured by her own personality, and
way
Use synonyms
 of behaviour with others in society. In modern life, these factors of
people
Use synonyms
 are more emphasized in social, professional and family life. In
this
Linking Words
 phenomenon, spotlighted personalities like celebrities, a famous
people
Use synonyms
 can contribute hugely to the
people
Use synonyms
 and future generations.
Firstly
Linking Words
, In the present
world
Use synonyms
, young
people
Use synonyms
 try to learn everything in a shorter
way
Use synonyms
such
Linking Words
 as trying to see youtube videos, and speeches by the
people
Use synonyms
 they like, In other ,words they try to follow and copy the
way
Use synonyms
 the solvers are suggested or guided. Here, the spotlighted individuals can help a much by providing socially acceptable well behaviour by using any media to reach /her followers.
For example
Linking Words
, when
people
Use synonyms
 find their personalities on any platform they try to follow the loved one's behaviour, dress up and even their
way
Use synonyms
 of talking. In
this
Linking Words
 ,
way
Use synonyms
 the spotlighted person easily can push some good behaviours and well mannerisms to his or her followers to make the work liveable. Another point is that the highlighted characteristic can make the
world
Use synonyms
 better by setting up some instances. Because
people
Use synonyms
 expect something special from the desired personalities.
For instance
Linking Words
, by donating to the charitable trust and helping the impoverished
people
Use synonyms
 they can arouse humanity among the
people
Use synonyms
 and even in the upcoming generation, which not only develops the followers' good mentality but
also
Linking Words
 make the sense of cooperativeness and sharing.
Finally
Linking Words
, as the pioneer of society even in the
world
Use synonyms
 spotlighted
people
Use synonyms
 can contribute to making the
world
Use synonyms
 happy,and a better place to live drawing the attention of the mass
people
Use synonyms
 to save the
people
Use synonyms
 and warn themselves to restrict bad things.
Submitted by Udayshankar on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: