The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table presents the data about the
population
of different ages in New Zealand
from 2011 to 2012.
Overall
, the highest change between these years was in the people
of the oldest age
. Moreover
, there was a slight decrease in the ages below teen and there was a minor increase in population
of Add an article
the population
people
of all ages.
To commence with, the people
below fifteen had a slight decrease of 0.2 per cent and the people
group 15-39 also
had the same change in percentage of 0.2 per cent. The age
group of 15-39 had the highest population
as compared to other age
groups.Moreover
, In 2012 there were around 1.6 million people
of this
age
group living in New Zealand
.
On the other hand
, there were around 1.3 million people
from age
40-64 were
living in New Unnecessary verb
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Zealand
. The overall
population
of New Zealand
was nearly 4.5 million in 2012. The people
of age
65 plus were small in numbers. These people
had the lowest ratio of population
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