You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter: remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was thank them for the card and gift explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

Dear All Colleagues, I writing
this
letter to remind my special birthday celebration
last
week. Thank you so much all members are to
coming
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this
celebration. As you remember, how was my birthday celebrated? We was playing lots of games and shears own life experiences,childhood memories as well as love affairs. After some time we were cutting a cake , played music and danced.
Moreover
, thank you so much to all members to join us and
also
you for giving these beautiful cards and gifts. I like Thai all present.
However
, I like a
tea
maker that gives me Suresh . It's very useful for me . I would make
tea
everyday morning, It's difficult for me because I have no time to make
tea
.it's a very helpful
tea
maker. Once again thank you for
this
amazing gift . Yours sincerely, Rahul
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