Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
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material
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materials
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has
individuals
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been produced
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the fastest-growing
rubbish
has increased by changes in our producing
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production
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government
plans.
The best reason for producing more and more litter is using more disposable dishes that cause gathering a larg
number Correct your spelling
large
rubbish
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of rubbish
In addition
, none of them compatible
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are compatible
nature
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apply
pollution
. The second
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useful
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offer
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to offer
with
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to
nature
. As a result
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the increasing
an increasing
pollution
.
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an active
pollution
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stuff
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pieces of stuff
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the ability
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to produce
fund
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funds
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, they Correct your spelling
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stuff
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is
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reproducible
do
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does
for
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. For example
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and gathering rubbish
around the jungles and seasides, after that by use
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to recycle
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products
use
individuals
.
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the duty
both
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of both
of
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apply
individuals
and government
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the government
solve
the issue related to Fix the infinitive
to solve
rubbish
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and air Add an article
the earth
pollution
. Thus
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two
about
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of
big
disaster we have been faced during Add an article
the big
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