Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays, with growing
communities
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the way of
consumption
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material
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materials
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have
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been changed by
individuals
. New chemical materials have
produced
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been produced
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by
fastest-growing
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technology. In time with that, the amount of
rubbish
has increased by changes in our
producing
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.
The one
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part of
this
issue will
solved
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by
government
plans. The best reason for producing more and more litter is using more disposable dishes that cause gathering a
larg
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large
number
rubbish
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of rubbish
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.
In addition
, none of them
compatible
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with
nature
. So, our country
face
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to
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earth
pollution
. The
second
reason, do not
introduce
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usefull
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useful
way
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ways
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for cycling our waste or
do
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not
offer
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materials being friendly
with
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nature
.
As a result
, we can not
use
again of our staffs that lead to
increasing
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the increasing
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amount of litters and burning them have been made air
pollution
.
Moreover
, our
government
can play
active
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an active
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role against
pollution
. On the one hand, by innovation in cycling, will
use
anew of waste that by
this
way have been able to produce new
stuffs
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stuff
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.
Furthermore
,
individuals
will have
ability
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the ability
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produce
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new things with less
fund
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funds
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.
On the other hand
, they
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create
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creat
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create
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new information to
teaching
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people what kind of
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stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
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stuffs
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stuff
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they should sell to customers which
be
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reprodusable
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reproducible
and
do
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not have any danger
for
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nature
.
For example
, some citizens are advocated
nature
and gathering
rubbish
around the jungles and seasides, after that by
use
of
government
plans
recycle
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them,
next
, make
new
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a new
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product
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products
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for
use
individuals
. In conclusion, it is
duty
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the duty
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both
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sides
of
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individuals
and
government
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the government
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solve
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to solve
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the issue related to
rubbish
causing
earth
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the earth
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and air
pollution
.
Thus
, by cooperative
tow
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two
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groups, each and every one of us aware
about
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of
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big
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the big
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disaster we have been faced during
this
century.
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  • consumerism
  • disposable culture
  • over-packaging
  • non-recyclable
  • public awareness
  • waste management
  • environmental impact
  • recycle
  • recycling facilities
  • waste separation
  • single-use products
  • infrastructure
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