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İmmigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigrations? To what consequenced can it lead?

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Human immigration can be witnessed all over the world, in search of better employment and secure
life
. As the result, overpopulation takes birth in
the
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developed
countries
 and
third
-world
countries
 suffered from brain drain. In
this
 essay, I will elaborate on the main reasons for immigration and the bad outcomes of the same. The most prominent reason to cross the border is to explore the high living standards with better opportunities for job, education and
life
 security, which all are available in wealthy
countries
. Whereas
situation
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 of underdeveloped
countries
 is miserable because of a lack of infrastructure and resources. So
that is
 why
people
 get attracted and moved to developed
countries
.
Moreover
, war and terrorism
has
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 been affecting the
life
 of the
people
,
hence
people
 just cross the border for a secure
life
 in economically stable
countries
.
For instance
,
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 for
Maxico
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Mexico
 immigrated to the USA for
the
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 better
life
. The outcome of
the
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immigration
for
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the
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poor
countries
 is
the
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 brain drain. The more skilled and educated employees have been moving to the economically sound
countries
, and poor
countries
 are just left with less smart
people
, who can not contribute much.
Furthermore
, more population is accumulated in wealthy
countries
, which put restrain on
resourses
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resources
 and aid
sechemes
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schemes
scheme
 for refugees increase burden on the government. To cite an example, the USA population hikes due to immigrants. To conclude, the whole world is not equal in terms of
life
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 standards and job opportunities, so
that is
 why
people
 are migrating to economically prosperous
countries
. The major drawbacks for poor
countries
is
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 a brain drain and destination
countries
 having overpopulation problem. Every corner of the world should be livable and prosperous
,
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 so that everyone gets
better
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life
.
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