Now a days more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. It is a positive or a negative development.

Modern

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days generation

believe

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believes

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in keeping associate online rather than one in one.

Thus

, some

persons

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people

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see nothing against

this

while others are

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okay

okey

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okay

with that.

This

essay will

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discuss

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discus

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discuss

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both

side

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sides

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of

views

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view

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and explain why is disadvantageous. Admittedly, there

has

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been some minor setbacks associated with

people

choosing social

media

as means of keeping

friends

.

firstly

, it's energy, strength and

time saving

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in visitation. Most businessmen who are usually busy base on the nature of

they

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their

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works

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work

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hardly have

chance

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a chance

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to see most

persons

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people

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or even make new

friends

, so

this

is the means they can easily meet some important

people

and socialised via

internet

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the internet

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.

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, the process of selling and buying today is at

peak

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its peak

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with

facebooks

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Facebook

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, whatapps

especially

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among

this

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these

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social

media

friends

.

Secondly

, it brings

people

of like

mind

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together which will eventually lead to marriage. In

early

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the early

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1950's

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1950s

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,

it's

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it was

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very difficult for intercultural marriages but with

this

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these

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online

thing's

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thing

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individuals of

different

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the different

a different

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ethnic

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ethic

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ethnic

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group

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groups

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can easily meet , make out

time

and actualize

they

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their

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dreams.

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, most black men are married

to

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apply

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white ladies of recent.

However

, despite the above minor merit, I believed that the demerit relating to

this

togetherness on social

media

are numerous

outweigh

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outweighs

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it

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its

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positive side. It

lead

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leads

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to

forcefulness

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the forcefulness

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development of

love

. The theologist of

love

development

believe

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believes

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that attraction is the

first

Stage, which will give birth to closeness and understanding before ending up in

love

.

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, most jobless youths are using

this opportunities

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this opportunity

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of

love

to fraud so many beautiful ladies of

they

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their

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hard incomes leading to frustration and death has the case maybe.

In addition

, it is

time consuming

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and expensive. Most of

this

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these

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so-called

friendship

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friendships

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via social

media

are

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is

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expensive to keep because of

constant

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the constant

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buying of data to chat and

nearly

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are nearly

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involved

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being involved

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every

hours

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hour

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, in the long run costing so much money.

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, statistics

has

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have

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founded

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found

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that most

persons

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people

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spend about 10% of

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their

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they

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the

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monthly incomes to buy data and to maintain

this unreal

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this unreal friend

these unreal friends

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friends

. In conclusion,

although

so many

people

prefer choosing to

socialized

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socialise

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online

which

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it

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has minor setbacks. I believe that the negative impact is riskier in terms of fake lovers,

time

involve and expense far surpasses the advantages .

Therefore

relevant Authorities should put policies to

reduced

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reduce

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this

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these

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effects.