In some countries, few young people go to musical concerts or performances at theatres. Why is this the case?, should young people be encouraged to participate in musicals and other types of performances?

In certain nations, it has been noted that a small number of adults visit musical shows or

performances

at the theatre,

this

is so because of the influence of modern

music

and idols.

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think the young

generation

should be supported to partake in

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and other various events in order to keep the culture of the country alive.

To begin

with, the main reason behind the decline in

population

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of young people going

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musical concerts or

performances

is the influence of new

music

on them.

This

is owing to the fact that the younger

generation

love

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the genres of songs that are currently released by the new age artist and

also

the style of beating in which

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song flows. They

also

love the noise generated while listening to the playlist, and so feel that the contemporary

music

is too monotonous and slow for their liking. Another point worth noting is that the youngsters take the recent musicians as their idol because their way of living, dressing and the type of songs

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release appeals to their own way of life. Davido the

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singer

for instance

is seen by many teenagers as their role model owing to the fact that his lifestyle is something that they love and his song is a vibe for them.

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performances

at the theatre

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seen as

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old fashioned

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by

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young adults and

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contemporary artists do not

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their body language.

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, keeping the tradition of the nation

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going is the major factor

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motivating the younger

generation

in contributing to

music

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the music

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industry and other

performances

.

This

means most of the musical and theatre

performances

are cultural displays and

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help in connecting the people to what has been set up by their ancestors

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as

such

if they do not participate to take up from where the older

generation

stopped, the culture of the nation will die out

thus

leading to lots of mistakes.

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magazine revealed that many youths do

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understand the traditions of their land following musical festivals. To reiterate, in as much as modern

music

and artist has influenced the lifestyle of the young people, the tradition of the country should not be allowed to disappear and so the youths should be encouraged to partake in

music

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the music

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industry and

performances

of different event.