Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some
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say that
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is a good way to bring
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of different cultures and ages together. I do agree with
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statement, in my point of view,
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could bring
people
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of different cultures together but cannot bring various age groups together.
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of all, it is true that there is no boundary between
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, every person from different cultural backgrounds could be touched by the same type or even just a clip of
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.
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is the widest implied language and it is
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the oldest language of our humans which means that we could contact each other through
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. At the same time, the diversity of
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is a significant symbol of cultural diversity as well. By communicating with
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, we could understand the root of a nation and its intrinsic spirit and even international organisations.
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, every time the Olympics Games be held, there will have
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main theme for it. One of the most famous ones is "Hand in Hand" which expressed the spirit of antiwar and a hope to bring all humans together.
On the other hand
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, it is difficult to bring different age groups through
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. The reason is there are gaps between age groups. Every generation has its own memories, and they cannot be experienced only by
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.
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, different tastes in
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are
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a hurdle to bring
people
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of different ages together.
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, many elderly
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cannot accept rap as they think it is over noisy while many youngsters cannot accept their old-fashioned taste as well. In conclusion, I admit and agree that
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could bring
people
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of various cultures together but kind of hard to bring different ages together.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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