Road accidents have become one of the biggest cause of fatalities nowadays. What are the cause of such accidents? How can this problem be dealt with?

These days, most
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people
accept that one of the major
causes
of death becomes car accidents. There are various
causes
of it and we need to try solutions to solve them.
Firstly
, one of the
causes
of car collisions is improper
traffic
system which includes the lack of maintenance of roads,
road
maps and directions. If drivers cannot see clearly the signs on the
road
especially at
nights
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and on rainy days, they can have difficulty in their sight which is very dangerous for them. Another reason is due to human beings which is disobedience of
traffic
laws and regulations.
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example, driving
car
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while
drunken
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is forbidden but
people
do not obey and
road
traffic
accidents happen which is risky for
people
's lives.
In addition
, fewer human resources like
road
polices
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takes
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part an important role as they are responsible for the safety of
people
's lives on
road
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by checking whether the citizens are obeying the laws or not. There are some optimal solutions for these
causes
. At
first
, the authorities from
transportation
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department should do monthly or quarterly monitoring of the
road
signs and if there are destructions, they should assign respective
professional
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to repair them urgently.
Secondly
, education sessions about
traffic
laws should be given broadly around the country and let the public know the importance, advantages and disadvantages of
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law
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abiding.
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last
but not
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least, many authorized persons are needed in strengthening the rules to monitor
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disobedient drivers and give appropriate punishments
such
as charging
fine
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money, restriction
of
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driving for a period etc. To summarize, there are
causes
for accidents and we
also
can find ways to reduce the mortality of
people
.
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