A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear
Ksihan
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Kishan
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, It is great to know that you will go
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camping on
upcoming
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long weekend. I am glad that you have
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me for taking
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for
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, I like to say that you will not leave
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opportunity to go
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adventereous
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adventurous
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trip.
Outdoor
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activity like camping has many advantages like you will get a chance to live in nature where you can make
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food for
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yourself
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yourself
.
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, you can
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arrange
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arrange
a
camfire
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campfire
where you and your friends can sing a song and play different games.
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, you will face an issue during sleeping which is the bites of insects like mosquitoes and flies. So please be cautious about it. I wish I could join you on
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trip!
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, I already made a plan to go
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to meet my cousin who just reached Canada, so he will feel good. Hope to see you soon. Warm wishes, Utsav
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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