The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are advantage and disadvantages to having one language In the world?

Tourism trading due to globalisation
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growing these decades ,so , there is a significant
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to know the international voice for all
people
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English
is the popular structure of speaking amongst many nationalities ,it has been transformed
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a sole
language
world,
however
,some opine there are
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reasons to limit
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even ,while, others think
this
is valuable for the human that has a common
language
to communicate,so, I am going to explain some piece of evidence for both viewpoints and give my opinion. At
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, humans use
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to communicate ,release their own emotional states ,entertainment and etc.,
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, the existence of an international design of speech is necessary to respond
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demands of
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around the world,
for example
, research studies have been done by the Austrian scientists where the
people
be able to speak in 3 languages and they are speaking
English
fluently, there is a growth in the tendency of other nationalities to visit more again from Austria and these tourists have been stated that the convenient communication with
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community is the reason for that ,so , it has seen the economical status of Austria has been nourished .
English
language
as the word model of speaking and writing is so useful ,because it will create
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common cultural experiences among
people
around the world ,so , the social intimacy and the sense of cooperation because
people
can understand each other ,in the end , if it will happen a crisis all would involve to solving the problematic issue,
for example
, I have seen a popular serial that the aeroplane has been fallen and passengers who can speak
English
fluently have created a group to help others, alongside, others have been trying to learn
English
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language
for dealing with their demands. To summarize,
this
is inevitable that the
English
accent is becoming an accepted model of speaking worldwide due to the increase in
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of tourists who are needed to common
language
for communication,
however
,
this
progress has many benefits
such
as accelerating interpersonal
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between nations ,
in addition
of , it will create the new source of cultural experience for all
people
,so, Governments should invest their budget to educating their citizens to speak
English
fluently.
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