The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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relies
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fulfil
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energy
demands. While people consider this
source inexpensive, high quality and most significantly a way to have national security, it cannot be overlooked that the demerits it brings with us are far more concerning. For instance
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. I strongly oppose this
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the pros
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important over its cons.
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ability to evoke a greater deal of destruction all over the world. Many Change the pronoun
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countries
where they have no such
facility that could ensure their security, are constantly frightened by their nearby countries
and other powerful ones, for they have their own nuclear powerplants
and stations. One Correct your spelling
power plants
such
recent example is the war between Russia and Ukraine, where the former used its nuclear source on the latter. As a result
, the lives of people there has
been greatly impacted. Correct subject-verb agreement
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Additionally
, the radioactive substances generated from nuclear stations affect its surrounding flora and fauna and quite
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are quite
hamrful
to humans as well, though the latter case is not usually seen as these stations are built far away from human civilisation.
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harmful
However
, it also
appears that this
energy
is reliable in some ways. For example
, providing us with non-polluted air and
is less costly to produce. Correct word choice
apply
Further
, a sense of peace and harmony is created by it, as it is the greatest weapon that any country could now have to ensure their safety and anyone would think twice before doing something that would lead them and others in trouble.
To sum up, In my view
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energy
can suppress the demrits
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demerits
this
power
. In other words
, if one nuclear bomb exploded, it would unquestionably destroy half of our planet.Submitted by ummekulsumkiryanawala on
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