Some people believe that companies and individuals, rather than governments, should pay to clean up the pollution they have caused. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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day by day .some individuals think that industry and folks are should pay to clean up the
pollution
they have more
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rather than authority.I agree with
this
statement to
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some large extent and
i
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will discuss the reasons in
further
paragraphs. It is true fact that mainly for the
pollution
folks and companies are responsible for
this
.they make influence and
pollution
without any thinking towards the environment.
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,they throw
the
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waste materials
on
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public places.
Moreover
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they blame
to
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the authority for
this
.
Hence
they increase
globel
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global
worming
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.if they never stopped the condition of
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the weather
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is
worsen
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rapidly.
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All individuals have moral duty to clean the environment and
do
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not make
the
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pollution
. Only the company and folks are not responsible for
this
.
Government
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also
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involve
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in
this
.so government take
a
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suitable action for
this
problem.
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,
law maker
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is not only
the
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victim
for
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pollution
.So they
not
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blame each other.They should clean the environment and live
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and healthy life. To sum up,
firstly
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lawmaker
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should make new criteria for
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this
problem.and take suitable action for
this
hurrdle
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.I stand with the former statement. Because for
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the
pollution
government has no fault
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