In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops,schools,offices ,and homes in specific areas and separate them fromeach other.Do you thing the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to more and more population relocating to cities ,the reality now is that urban spaces are overcrowded ,in regard to city planning,city planners more likely to use functional zoning.
For example
, residential areas ,business districts, and
also
commercial districts , without a doubt ,that's a better
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to make the layout of a city easier to understand, but they
also
bring many potential issues at the same time. Optimising the use of infrastructure is always a hot topic in society in China in order to improve the quality of life for citizens.At the same time, functional zoning can
also
achieve efficient land use and reduce the overdevelopment of land.
For instance
, highly centralised stores and supplies in a specific area will make it more convenient for shoppers to compare goods, prices and services.From the perspective of the government's point of view ,it's easier to manage and centralise governance.From another perspective,it
also
can reduce air and noise pollution if industry zones are far from the residential areas.
However
,everything has two sides that seem like the front and back sides of one coin.Increasing traffic volumes in some fields will be the
first
negative effect,especially in residential spaces.Increased traffic pressure means more pollution from gas emissions.
Moreover
, no matter the shops ,schools and
also
the offices in business districts , are facing the same challenge-- competition.To be honest,more and more centralization will bring tougher competition. Personally, I think it is important to find the balance of functional zoning, on the basis of satisfying the efficiency and impacts of each area, so we can carry out better urban construction.
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