Some people think that the goverment is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree?

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this

modern era, the

nation

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administration

adminstration

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administration

is

foucusing

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focusing

on

arts

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the arts

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. Few people argue that

government

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the government

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is wasting money on the

arts

and

claims

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that

budget

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could

be use

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for

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some better way. I partially agree with the given statement. In

this

essay

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i

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will discuss

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point of view in detail with relevant ideas and examples. On the one hand, spending money on

arts

have

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several benefits.

Firstly

,

arts

are linked with every individual

nations

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cultures

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which represents the identity of

country

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the country

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with the help of amount

money

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it could be better than

past

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because

,

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trend

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towards

arts

is significantly increasing.

For instance

,

arts

has

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become

important

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subject in

education

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institutions to expose

country's

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talent.

Secondly

,

arts

are

integral

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part of

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society's

society

societies

societys

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cultural

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because it gives attention to many people and

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represent the

representnthe

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represent the

inward significance of things .

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often single piece of

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the draw

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draw

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can

gives

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plenty of views

On the other hand

,

government

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the government

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should allocate budget towards public services, infrastructure and medical rather than

arts

because, citizens are mainly needed of which is

helpfull

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helpful

to their daily life as a

consequences

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to

better

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life to illustrates, providing good public transport leads to comfortable to travel and

also

saving their time.

Furthermore

,

younger

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generation

are

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not much interested in

a drawings

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drawings

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but, shows interest

on

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sports. So,

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administration

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the adminstration

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adminstration

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administration

should spend their budget on sports by constructing additional outdoor and indoor stadiums. In conclusion, in my perspective

art

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sector is important they should develop similar to other sectors.

Arts

have certain merits to nations but

also

could be neglected which will not

thertant

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the rant

to country