Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

To begin

with, I should say various nations are becoming

hemogeneous

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homogeneous

homogenous

,

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because citizenries can purchase the alike goods worldwide. Due to state of the art, disparate humans

intuch

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touch

each other with different

divices

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devices

, and gadgets;

such

as cellphones internet,

whatsapp

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WhatsApp

Whatsapp

, etc.

As a result

, in

this

kind of relationship, people have close

communications

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, so their

willing

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become

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convergence. Actually, I

am agree

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with

above

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notion, due to

third

reasons; I will explain them in the following.

Golobalization

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Globalization

causes mankind needs similar goods, called

acommoditties

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commodities

.

First

of all,

this

necessity is sensed disparate goods should be available, anywhere in the world.

For instance

, nowadays we can find apple

cellphone

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in each

country

, worldwide or we can probe Indian customs in Newyork

strrets

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streets

.

Secondly

, different import and export companies can develop the economic situation of their

country

by exchanging domestic productions.

For example

,

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during

durring

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during

corona

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pandemic, the

cinopharm

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Sinopharm

vaccine

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export

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from china to other countries.

Thirdly

, not only does the economy of countries enhance, but it

also

make

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a lot of job opportunities for local

inhabitats

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inhabitants

. While

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the economic circumstance of a

country

augment

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, the life level of its residents

are

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also

ameliorated. So these reasons cause similarity between various

country

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be

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pleasant.

However

, some folks think it is better that each

country

uses its domestic productions and avoid

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foreign

forcing

forieng

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foreign

kinds. I reckon, if a

country

only utilizes its national kinds, likely, its procedures, will not have any international

competator

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competitor

competition

, and in

this

way

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they hardly increase the quality of their

commoditties

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commodities

, or

may

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be offer

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their productions more expensive than the actual worth,

thus

this

manner may not be userfriendly. To conclude, I feel any evolution activity has pleasant and unpleasant sides, but in

this

issue

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the merits of the topic

is

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outperform

to

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its disadvantages.