Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

To begin
with, I should say various nations are becoming
hemogeneous
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homogeneous
homogenous
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because citizenries can purchase the alike goods worldwide. Due to state of the art, disparate humans
intuch
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touch
each other with different
divices
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devices
, and gadgets;
such
as cellphones internet,
whatsapp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
, etc.
As a result
, in
this
kind of relationship, people have close
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, so their
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become
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convergence. Actually, I
am agree
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with
above
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notion, due to
third
reasons; I will explain them in the following.
Golobalization
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Globalization
causes mankind needs similar goods, called
acommoditties
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commodities
.
First
of all,
this
necessity is sensed disparate goods should be available, anywhere in the world.
For instance
, nowadays we can find apple
cellphone
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in each
country
, worldwide or we can probe Indian customs in Newyork
strrets
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streets
.
Secondly
, different import and export companies can develop the economic situation of their
country
by exchanging domestic productions.
For example
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during
durring
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during
corona
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pandemic, the
cinopharm
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Sinopharm
vaccine
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export
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from china to other countries.
Thirdly
, not only does the economy of countries enhance, but it
also
make
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a lot of job opportunities for local
inhabitats
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inhabitants
. While
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the economic circumstance of a
country
augment
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, the life level of its residents
are
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also
ameliorated. So these reasons cause similarity between various
country
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be
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pleasant.
However
, some folks think it is better that each
country
uses its domestic productions and avoid
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foreign
forcing
forieng
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foreign
kinds. I reckon, if a
country
only utilizes its national kinds, likely, its procedures, will not have any international
competator
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competitor
competition
, and in
this
way
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they hardly increase the quality of their
commoditties
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commodities
, or
may
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be offer
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their productions more expensive than the actual worth,
thus
this
manner may not be userfriendly. To conclude, I feel any evolution activity has pleasant and unpleasant sides, but in
this
issue
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the merits of the topic
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outperform
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its disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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