Human diet has changed throughout history. How has it changed? In your opinion, has the change been good or bad?
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, the more convenient, the more harmful they will get.
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devices, and they are being blamed for at least minor risks if used on a long-term daily basis. Linking Words
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, most processed foods are high in saturated fats and eventually lead to obesity. They cannot become substitutes for their diet, which is still not so easy to prepare due to the nature of its cooking methods. Linking Words
For example
, some Vietnamese traditional foods are pretty hard to process. Linking Words
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, if they eat canned foods, they cannot have the original taste which may lead to excess nutrients.
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