Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficlult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antartica. What are benefits or disadvantages for tourists visiting such places?
In
this
day and age, It is widely accepted that people
want to go to hazardous places
where dangerous environments for living and share their lifestyles exciting as extreme sports to being celebrities like Instagram superstars. In other words
, it seems to have benefits for them. However
, there is a more persuasive argument that people
could encounter dangerous situations in these places
.
On the one hand, it is true that travelling hazard places
could attract people
and make money because it would be challenging to live. For example
, by posting their experience online such
as Youtube
or Instagram, tourist can show up their abilities physically and mentally to their audiences. Change preposition
on Youtube
In addition
, if the place is very dangerous, the tourist would be attracted more and more people
; it would increase their value and then
they can make money.
Nevertheless
, there are clear that the places
such
as the Sahara Desert or Antartica
have unexpected environments. It is true that tourists could have dangerous situations and Correct your spelling
Antarctica
people
cannot expect essential facilities such
as hospitals, food markets and police to live as well as there is no way to rescue them by mobile phone. In other words
, they can be died or be injured unless they are experts to alive. As a result
, any benefits cannot replace alive.
In conclusion, although
there are some benefits, it is evident that the disadvantages of visiting places
where hard conditions outweigh them. Therefore
, it is important that people
should decide carefully to travel to these places
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