In many countries today, major cities have become too big and overcrowded. Why is this? What measures could be taken to reduce this problem?

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city no one knows about it ,
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attention to unknown places that were dumped due to floods or earthquakes , they could find a beautiful space to work as well for living propose.
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there were about 12% area is under unknown places, we should work on them .The government should take conservative
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related to it. To conclude
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analysis of the main subject, I
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believed that the government should take steps to encourage the community to go .
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