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Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

#people #e- #books #technology #newspaper #magazines
In
this
 very drastic expansion of
digital
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the digital
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 era,
people
 nowadays can do everything they desire online, one of them is reading any kind of
e-
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e-book
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books
 and e-newspapers. Many believe that
this
 will
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a
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result in the loss of
habit
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the habit
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for
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of
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 buying printed
books
.
Hence
, the chance of
this
 habitual loss will be discussed in
this
 essay before reaching its conclusions. Having smartphones and laptop is a basic and common thing now. Most individuals even kids used to do their job and task using those devices by surfing
on
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the internet, including reading online.
Moreover
, paperless to save
earth
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 is a trend now, so many individuals especially students will
favor
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 reading online, and making it into
lifestyle
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a lifestyle
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. The greater thing is mostly the
books
, publications, and other study materials can be found for free.
Furthermore
, it is more practical to carry a smartphone than bring some heavy
books
 or wide frail newspapers. Another reason is,
it
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 is faster and more effective to find some news or information needed just by typing it on google
then
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and then
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download
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downloading
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 it.
People
 do not really have to find it harder directly place to place to buy
books
, let alone if the place is extremely far. Unfortunately, spending too
many times
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much time
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 reading online can cause eye fatigue,
some
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and some
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even
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are even
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 more prone to eye
damages
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damage
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.
In addition
, some
people
 feel nauseous and refuse not to read physical
books
 for the sake of comfort.
additionally
, old societies find it hard to read something virtually due to their visual condition and their lacking of
technology
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 ability. In conclusion, no matter how advanced and affordable the technology towards the existence of reading materials, some
people
 will prefer to buy printed
books
 or newspapers in the future due to their physically
issue
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issues
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 or preference.
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