Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting the usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

During ancient times,
people
used to treat themselves by creating their own medicines. Nowadays because of technological developments,
people
go to
hospitals
.
However
, some do not go to
hospitals
because they do not want to get in touch with
people
.
This
is not
also
a great idea as the doctors have better
knowledges
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in medicinal fields.
Firstly
, traditional medicine is made from herbs without mixing chemicals and they used to prefer
this
method. Most
of
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the
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people
knew how to treat themselves without seeing doctors when there was no hospital like today.
In addition
, because of advanced technologies, they learn everything from internet platforms like google,
facebook
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and youtube.
However
, one should not believe in that sources absolutely.
On the other hand
, the public nowadays thinks that medicine was actually mixed with chemicals which will affect them later.
Besides
, the medicines are really expensive as it is
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for them to buy from pharmacies and
also
some patients are allergic to medicines.
However
, we have to think before getting late.So even if some are allergic to drugs, a doctor will definitely change that drug and treat it. To conclude, it is better if patients visit
hospitals
and consult doctors
instead
of trying their own treatment.
Moreover
, promoters should motivate the community to come to
hospitals
and do health facilities appropriately and exactly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative medicines
  • treatments
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • health problems
  • usual doctor
  • access
  • personalized approach
  • holistic well-being
  • lack of regulation
  • evidence-based research
  • proper medical treatment
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