You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Sussane, I hope you and your family are doing well. My name is Martina and live in Hillcrest in the Bentonville area. I moved in

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2022. I am planning to arrange a party with my friends on 20th July starting from 7:00pm. I decided to keep a simple floral decoration so the house looks elegant. A small balloon decoration on our front porch with a welcome sign will help guests easily spot your new home from the street. I am keeping my menu very simple with finger foods and appetizers followed by pizza from a local restaurant. There will be drink dispensers filled with iced tea and lemonade for kids and obviously beer and wines for older people. There will be some games for kids in the basement. I am inviting my relatives, friends and some neighbours in the Bentonville area, which will be around 30 people gathering. I would like to invite you to our party and know more about your family. I love to know more about the area, which can let our family adopt the Bentonville neighbourhood quickly. Looking forward to seeing you on 20th July 2011. Yours sincerely, Catherine.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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