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Some countries pay extremely high salaries to people. Some people believe that the country must not do that and make a limit for the salaries. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years many countries
companies
 paying big
salaries
 to their worker. Many people argued that the nations should make
a
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limit
for
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employees
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employees'
employee's
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wage
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wages
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 and must not provide big
salaries
.
However
, I believe that paying
employer
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employers
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 high
salaries
 is completely justified. Providing high
wage
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 to employees is beneficial for their daily
life
. When people get
a lucrative
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a lucrative salary
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salaries
, they can easily maintain their families and save
money
 for their future which developed their standard of
livings
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living
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.
For example
, if a person gets 10000 USD per month from his/her
company
, he/she can
lives
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 a luxurious
life
 and deposit
money
 for his/her upcoming days.
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Therefore
Therfore
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Therefore
,
companies
 should provide
big
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 amount of
money
 to
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the worker
a worker
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worker
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workers
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 to sustain their
life
 happily.
Moreover
, giving extensive
payment
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payments
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 to
employer
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the employer
an employer
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 can returns profit to
company
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the company
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 as well. Workers can find joy to
work
 by getting large
money
. They could
work
 with more attention by
hopping
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hoping
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 to get
promotion
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promotions
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 and improve their position which ultimately rise
companies
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companies'
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 financial structure.
For instance
, when employees know that they can gain a better rank and more
money
 if they complete
companies
 target, they will
work
 with their all
engergy
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energy
 to complete
first
this
 target resulting in
companies
 target will
be fulfil
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. So the more
competitions
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competition
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 among
companies
 worker, the higher profit
company
 will get. 
Furthermore
, little
wage
 brings detriment to
workers
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workers'
worker's
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 daily subsistence and
companies
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companies'
company's
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condition
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conditions
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. Small paid labourer finds trouble
to spend
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 their daily lives which become stressful for them and they lose
their
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interest
to
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 their
work
. To
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exemplify
examplify
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exemplify
, a guard who
get
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 1000 USD per month can’t sustain his daily
lives
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life
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 happily.
This
 may lead to their
life
 under pressure
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as a result
 they can’t concentrate on
work
 which is harmful
for
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company
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the company
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.
Hence
,
company
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the company
a company
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 should
offers
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offer
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 a standard
wage
 to
employer
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employers
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 according to their position. In conclusion, most
companies
 give their workers a huge salary which is essential for both
company
 and
employer
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the employer
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. At
last
, I do not agree with the idea that
company
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 should not do that or there should be a limitation.
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