You came to know about a piece of equipment that would help you at your workplace. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the equipment • explain how it might be helpful in your workplace • offer help in purchasing it.

Dear Manager, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to make a recommendation on office grocery. I recently came across an interesting electrical gadget. It is a watch,
shares
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a resemblance with the Apple watch.
However
, it is sold at a cheaper price and it is multifunctional. People can use it for audio and video recording. I find
this
item extremely helpful, especially when it comes to conference recording. As you may be aware, I always have a difficult time catching up with the speaker, so I miss lots of key points at the conference. With the help of
this
watch, I can note down all the information swiftly.
This
watch can be found on many commercial online shopping websites. You may
also
directly contact the
sales person
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salesperson
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by calling 0920393. They will provide more detailed information to you if required. Thank you in advance.  Best regards.  Clarence
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  • ergonomic
  • cost-effective
  • streamline processes
  • boost productivity
  • enhance efficiency
  • high-quality
  • integrate into our workflow
  • ROI (return on investment)
  • implement
  • facilitate
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