You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Anoop I am writing to inform you that I would like to attend the grand seminar for developers for better career opportunities in Munich.

Also

, I want you to send me the detailed information. More likely, when is the program and where is it conducted. The number of days the program is and the seminar agenda so I can plan my flight tickets

accordingly

Moreover

, Is there any accommodation provided? If so, how much will the cost be? Most importantly, Are there any discounts and sponsorships for students? Please share with me all the details on my email ID.

Furthermore

, If the accommodation is not provided, I would be grateful if you recommend me for suitable housing during the program which is near to the seminar venue. Yours Sincerely, Sushmitha

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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7 paragraphs

132 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel，To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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