Many museums and historic sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than by local residents. What are the causes of this? What can be done for museums and historic sites to attract more local visitors?

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It's commonplace that many
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and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than by local residents. There are many reasons behind it, and they will be explained in the following paragraphs.
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and foremost. Their content is monotonous and tedious. Take me as an example. I was in Berlin
last
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month, and I visited many
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in Berlin. I would say the
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in those
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were eye-catching and arresting;
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, I wouldn't visit them again. Not only because of the content but
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because of their poor transportation. As we know, the number of
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in a
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is finite;
in other words
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, whenever you visit it, you will probably see the same
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. It's difficult to get new
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in a
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.
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, a
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or historical site usually requires a large space, which means they probably have poor public transport.
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, their target groups are limited. As we know, a
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and historical site is always tranquil and quiet;
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, they are only popular for people who have time to really enjoy those
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and like tranquillity.
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, it doesn't seem that those tourist attractions are in line with young people's tastes.
In addition
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, our prolonged working hours are
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one the main causes. Because we have to work longer, we don't have surplus time to visit
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or historical sites.
On the other hand
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, there are some ways for
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and historical sites to attract more local visitors.
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,
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can hold some activities,
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as a treasure hunt. Children can find some real "
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" in a treasure hunt, like a dinosaur model. If a
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can catch children's fondness,
then
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it is bound to attract more visitors, because kids always come with parents. In conclusion, there are two main reasons and the best solution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tourists
  • historic sites
  • culture
  • heritage
  • taken for granted
  • marketing and promotion
  • advertising
  • entry fees
  • incentives
  • educational programs
  • Local Appreciation Days
  • interactive exhibitions
  • immersive experiences
  • social media campaigns
  • community engagement
  • sense of ownership
  • cultural heritage
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