Many museums and historic sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than by local residents. What are the causes of this? What can be done for museums and historic sites to attract more local visitors?

It's commonplace that many
museums
and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than by local residents. There are many reasons behind it, and they will be explained in the following paragraphs.
First
and foremost. Their content is monotonous and tedious. Take me as an example. I was in Berlin
last
month, and I visited many
museums
in Berlin. I would say the
antiques
in those
museums
were eye-catching and arresting;
however
, I wouldn't visit them again. Not only because of the content but
also
because of their poor transportation. As we know, the number of
antiques
in a
museum
is finite;
in other words
, whenever you visit it, you will probably see the same
antiques
. It's difficult to get new
antiques
in a
museum
.
Besides
, a
museum
or historical site usually requires a large space, which means they probably have poor public transport.
Second
, their target groups are limited. As we know, a
museum
and historical site is always tranquil and quiet;
in other words
, they are only popular for people who have time to really enjoy those
antiques
and like tranquillity.
Therefore
, it doesn't seem that those tourist attractions are in line with young people's tastes.
In addition
, our prolonged working hours are
also
one the main causes. Because we have to work longer, we don't have surplus time to visit
museums
or historical sites.
On the other hand
, there are some ways for
museums
and historical sites to attract more local visitors.
For instance
,
museums
can hold some activities,
such
as a treasure hunt. Children can find some real "
antiques
" in a treasure hunt, like a dinosaur model. If a
museum
can catch children's fondness,
then
it is bound to attract more visitors, because kids always come with parents. In conclusion, there are two main reasons and the best solution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tourists
  • historic sites
  • culture
  • heritage
  • taken for granted
  • marketing and promotion
  • advertising
  • entry fees
  • incentives
  • educational programs
  • Local Appreciation Days
  • interactive exhibitions
  • immersive experiences
  • social media campaigns
  • community engagement
  • sense of ownership
  • cultural heritage
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