The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems connected with using the web? What solutions can you suggest?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
There is no doubt that the Internet has provided many benefits to
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
people's
live
Replace the word
lives
show examples
in many ways
interms
Correct your spelling
in terms
of communication in the
Correct your spelling
globalization
gobalization
Correct your spelling
globalisation
era and ease of doing business.
Nevertheless
Linking Words
, the widespread use of
Correct article usage
the webs
show examples
webs
Fix the agreement mistake
web
show examples
has affected negatively to many for some reasons. Perhaps, one of the main
cause
Fix the agreement mistake
causes
show examples
of
this
Linking Words
is uploading and sharing
privacy
Replace the word
private
show examples
information
Use synonyms
online which has
Correct your spelling
brought
brough
Correct your spelling
brought
eyes
on
Change preposition
to
show examples
scammar
Correct your spelling
scammer
scammers
and criminals easily without even necessary stalking. Take social media platform called Facebook as an example, users posting
theirs
Correct the word
their
show examples
dailiy
Correct your spelling
daily
activitivies
Correct your spelling
activities
might attract criminals to get
information
Use synonyms
without even being asked.
Linking Words
Additionally
Add a comma
,Additionally
show examples
Facebook tracks customers' daily routing and
share
Change the verb form
shares
show examples
with the advertisement companies. To commence with
this
Linking Words
problem,
government
Add an article
the government
show examples
should impose consumers law not only on giant media
platform
Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
show examples
but
also
Linking Words
e-commerce
Change preposition
on e-commerce
show examples
website
Fix the agreement mistake
websites
show examples
, not to share
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
information
Use synonyms
without any consent
by
Change preposition
from
show examples
clients, and to make
awarness
Correct your spelling
awareness
to citizens on how dangerous is by sharing day to day
information
Use synonyms
on social media.
Additionally
Linking Words
,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
technology company like
smartphone
Fix the agreement mistake
smartphones
show examples
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
should block sharing
Use synonyms
information
Change preposition
of information
show examples
to
Change preposition
with
show examples
those applications. For
instant
Add an article
an instant
show examples
, Apple just recently launched new IOS
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
which informs
user
Add an article
the user
show examples
whether they would allow
to share
Change the verb form
sharing
show examples
their
information
Use synonyms
with the applications. A
further
Linking Words
cause is that the teenager could access freely to
pronography
Correct your spelling
pornography
and violent websites. As
Correct your spelling
a
show examples
as
Correct your spelling
a
show examples
result, they might bring that
Correct your spelling
fantasy
fantacy
Correct your spelling
fantasy
world from
Correct article usage
the webs
show examples
webs
Fix the agreement mistake
web
show examples
to their real life, ends up,
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
crime
such
Linking Words
as rape,violence and others might be going up.
First
Linking Words
and foremost, the possible solution is that parents should restrict the
usgage
Correct your spelling
usage
of
smartphone
Fix the agreement mistake
smartphones
show examples
on
Change preposition
at
show examples
their younger age.
Secondly
Linking Words
, by sharing the family network with the adolescents, they might be restricted to access webs which are not allowed for
certain
Add an article
the certain
show examples
age
group
Fix the agreement mistake
groups
show examples
.
For example
Linking Words
, there are some sorts of computers which has already blocked unwanted links. To conclude, even though the wide usage of
internet
Correct article usage
the internet
show examples
has
brough
Correct your spelling
brought
our lives more convenient and accessible to the whole universe, there are always cons and problems which might come
next
Linking Words
.
Submitted by aungkyawmoe.j14 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • widespread use
  • main problems
  • associated with
  • cybercrime
  • hacking
  • privacy
  • data security
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • addiction
  • excessive screen time
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • online scams
  • fraud
  • loss of productivity
  • impersonal communication
  • social isolation
  • digital divide
  • solutions
  • suggest
What to do next:
Look at other essays: