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The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems connected with using the web? What solutions can you suggest?

#internet #web
There is no doubt that the Internet has provided many benefits to
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people's
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 in many ways
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in terms
 of communication in the
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globalization
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globalisation
 era and ease of doing business.
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webs
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 has affected negatively to many for some reasons. Perhaps, one of the main
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 of
this
 is uploading and sharing
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information
 online which has
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brought
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brought
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scammer
scammers
 and criminals easily without even necessary stalking. Take social media platform called Facebook as an example, users posting
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dailiy
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daily
activitivies
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activities
 might attract criminals to get
information
 without even being asked.
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 Facebook tracks customers' daily routing and
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 with the advertisement companies. To commence with
this
 problem,
government
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 should impose consumers law not only on giant media
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platforms
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 but
also
e-commerce
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website
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websites
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, not to share
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information
 without any consent
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 clients, and to make
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awareness
 to citizens on how dangerous is by sharing day to day
information
 on social media.
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,
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technology company like
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smartphones
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,
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 should block sharing
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of information
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to
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 those applications. For
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, Apple just recently launched new IOS
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which informs
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 whether they would allow
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 their
information
 with the applications. A
further
 cause is that the teenager could access freely to
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pornography
 and violent websites. As
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 result, they might bring that
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fantasy
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fantasy
 world from
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webs
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 to their real life, ends up,
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crime
such
 as rape,violence and others might be going up.
First
 and foremost, the possible solution is that parents should restrict the
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usage
 of
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smartphones
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on
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 their younger age.
Secondly
, by sharing the family network with the adolescents, they might be restricted to access webs which are not allowed for
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.
For example
 , there are some sorts of computers which has already blocked unwanted links. To conclude, even though the wide usage of
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 has
brough
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brought
 our lives more convenient and accessible to the whole universe, there are always cons and problems which might come
next
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • widespread use
  • main problems
  • associated with
  • cybercrime
  • hacking
  • privacy
  • data security
  • cyberbullying
  • online harassment
  • addiction
  • excessive screen time
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • online scams
  • fraud
  • loss of productivity
  • impersonal communication
  • social isolation
  • digital divide
  • solutions
  • suggest
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