In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

All vehicles will be autonomous in the future. Passengers are the only
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who
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inside them, I believe that
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could help
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amount of cost in our
society
, and
this
advantage far outweighs any potential disadvantage. One downside of self-driving
cars
might be lead
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large number of employment
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. Nowadays, there are many people
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driving
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industry like bus drivers, truck
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and
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couriers. If vehicles are
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, which
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they will
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their jobs and affect their living.
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,
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think
this
can be avoided. drivers re-skill to get themselves a job in a new sector. On the positive side, driverless
cars
could help car owners and companies to reduce
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and operating expenses. reduction
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largest proportion of money can be saved for
society
. Since the majority of congestion accidents are made by human errors which may cost a lot of money not only
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but
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healthcare system. Compare with traditional
cars
, driverless
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are relatively safer and
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budgets in
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problems. I think
this
could create a great advantage for
society
as a whole because people could devote the money they save to other aspects of their activities. In conclusion,
although
autonomous vehicles would result in larger unemployment
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believe
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huge spending saving in
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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