Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Many proficients think that pupils are benefits if they start to learn a foreign
language
at primary school
instead
of secondary school. I believe that multilingual can help them fully
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in their future, and
this
advantage far outweighs any potential disadvantages.
One
downside of learning a
sencond
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second
language
at primary school might go
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a
confuding
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confusing
time in which won't know how to express themselves. The main reason is that parents try to speak two languages, their mother
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tongue
and
other
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another language
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language
to their
children
when they just started to talk,
this
lead to confusion because
children
get used to mixing words. Like my nephew, his parents always talk to him in Cantonese and English. He is 9 years old now but he
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unable to express himself just using
one
language
. To
adviod
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avoid
this
situation, It is recommended to give them enough time to acquire and fully understand
one
language
before
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another
one
. On the positive side,
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one
more
language
at a young age can improve cognitive skills,
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social and emotional skills. Since the human brain develops the most in childhood and
children
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a sponge, which absorbs everything. It is more likely for them
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their main learning pathways during their
first
few years of life.
For instance
,
children
learn how to swimming can faster
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. I think
this
could create a great advantage for pupils as a whole because they could
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explore
various aspects of their life. In conclusion,
although
bilingual would result in confusion in their childhood
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believe
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downside is greatly outweighed by the upside that a
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development for
children
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