One of your friends lives in another country.you want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend. Describe why you want to work in that country. Tell him about your skills and experience. As some other questions related to work.

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Hi How are you? and I hope you are doing well. I heard from our friend Rocky that you have recently moved to

Dubai

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from Delhi after completing your post-graduation. It has been a while since we met, please let me know when you are in town

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time, we need to catch up to discuss a few career prospects and my personal life. As you know from my school days, I always wanted to work in

Dubai

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after completing my engineering degree because the city is rated as one of the best places to live and work in the Asian continent and

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offers great scope for engineers in the construction industry. In recent times, due to economic developments, the local government has announced plans for the development of megacities. These new mega constructions have created huge potential for

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engineers from reputed institutions. During my bachelor's degree, my course

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specialized in Civil Engineering and in my Master’s I opted to study project management. For the past 4 years, I am currently working with a major contractor in India as an Assistant Project Manager. My role is to validate the technical aspects of the building design from the constructability perspective and

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to manage construction activity at the site as per the project schedule. I was told by my colleagues that there are good job opportunities in

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for candidates with

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similar experience and skillset. Since you are already working in

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, Can you please share details about the salary that I can expect or demand during my interview and the other benefits

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as insurance and travel tickets family, housing allowances,...etc.? Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Srinivasan M

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

286 words

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One of your friends lives in another country.you want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend. Describe why you want to work in that country. Tell him about your skills and experience. As some other questions related to work.

The Closing

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Rich countries should not employ skilled labour from poor countries, as the poor countries need the workers more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Task 2 Many developed counties now have large numbers of people over the age 65 . What problems might this cause ? . How can the problems be solved