Governments should focus spending only on public services, not waste on the arts. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a topical controversy about the expense
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social services and artistic activities. Some people advocate spending on
arts
is squandering since there
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a range of public issues that require immediate action from the authority while the rest argue for an adverse opinion. From my standpoint,
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do believe that both
arts
and public
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services
servies
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services
play a crucial role in national development.
Therefore
, it would be better to balance 2 aspects 
instead
of abundance. With regard to social welfare, it is undeniable that each country has pressing problems that urge viable solutions.
Vietnam
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,
for instance
, in the past few years, the transport infrastructure was very detrimental that there
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a wide range of traffic congestion on daily basis. It is not until now that
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transportation is much enhanced but
the
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education
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recently criticized for changeable regulations which create many
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for students. In other countries, those barriers would be about medication
system
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or economically backward residents that
also
necessitate solutions from governments.
However
,
arts
also
play a pivotal role in educating and enriching the souls and knowledge of
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society. Aside from a prevalent and
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form of recreational activities, each masterpiece carries special connotations and roots which will progress both
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and academic evolvement of viewers.
Furthermore
, artistic innovation is associated with social development and represents the culture of
this
region. It is obvious that countries with phenomenal celebrities and eminent artists are believed as having rich
culture
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and
high
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educated
population
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. South Korea,
for example
, spreads their speciality and culture through their entertainment industry and triggers the demand for
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products. Cited
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a tourism report in 2020, 11% of tourists came to
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Asian countries because of BTS - a famous male group. It is evident that
arts
do not only positively impact on product industry but
also
tourism and service. In short, while public amenities facilitate our lives,
arts
nurture people from the inside.
Thus
, it is of significance to equal both categories for a mentally and
physicall
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physically
wealthy community and they should not overtake each other.
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