Governments should focus spending only on public services, not waste on the arts. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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social services and artistic activities. Some people advocate spending on

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is squandering since there

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a range of public issues that require immediate action from the authority while the rest argue for an adverse opinion. From my standpoint,

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do believe that both

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and public

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services

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services

play a crucial role in national development.

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, it would be better to balance 2 aspects 

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of abundance. With regard to social welfare, it is undeniable that each country has pressing problems that urge viable solutions.

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,

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, in the past few years, the transport infrastructure was very detrimental that there

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a wide range of traffic congestion on daily basis. It is not until now that

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transportation is much enhanced but

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education

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recently criticized for changeable regulations which create many

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for students. In other countries, those barriers would be about medication

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or economically backward residents that

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necessitate solutions from governments.

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,

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play a pivotal role in educating and enriching the souls and knowledge of

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society. Aside from a prevalent and

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form of recreational activities, each masterpiece carries special connotations and roots which will progress both

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and academic evolvement of viewers.

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, artistic innovation is associated with social development and represents the culture of

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region. It is obvious that countries with phenomenal celebrities and eminent artists are believed as having rich

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and

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educated

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. South Korea,

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, spreads their speciality and culture through their entertainment industry and triggers the demand for

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products. Cited

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a tourism report in 2020, 11% of tourists came to

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Asian countries because of BTS - a famous male group. It is evident that

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do not only positively impact on product industry but

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tourism and service. In short, while public amenities facilitate our lives,

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nurture people from the inside.

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, it is of significance to equal both categories for a mentally and

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wealthy community and they should not overtake each other.