You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that, I had taken the 4 wheeler from our company on yesterday for my official work. Because unfortunately, I met with a small accident today morning.

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, as on, yesterday I have taken a vehicle from our company transport department which is going to purchase a few materials for our new project. Because due to pandemic were projected task was delayed. So it needs to be complete within a short duration of time.

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, while I was driving a car in the morning on Janaki Raman Street, which is civil workers occupied the whole area due to that, heavy traffic on that place.

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, someone from the backside knocked on our car. Even though, the whole part of the storage place which is present behind the car was heavily crushed. My sincere apology for happened a small accident. Yours Faithfully, Dhanusiya Foroughi nia

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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agreement number
accident
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collision
damage
fault
insurance
liability
emergency services
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evidence
witnesses
contact details
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compensation
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circumstances
chronological order
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You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: when and where you hired it describe how the accident happened what kind of action did you take after the accident

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