You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter # Explain why you would like this # Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ # Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my concern about the advertisement for taking care of a 6-year child. Since I have seen

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, I have been so glad that eventually, I found an opportunity to get some practical experience in nursing outside my country.

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, I will

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have a chance to meet and spend special time with a foreign family to observe closely and learn more about their culture, tradition and language. I think I am perfect a candidate for

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job. I have done my bachelor's degree in nursing and have a vast experience of about 6 years in

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field.

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, I achieved the award of "The best caretaker of the year"

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year from the National Health department because of my responsiveness and decent behaviour.

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, I looked after more than 50 people including from 6-month-old babies to 60-year-old people. If I get

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job I would love to pursue some international course in nursing or do a diploma along with it to grab more knowledge.

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that, I will join a sports club in my leisure time to stay fit and healthy. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Arsalan Farooq

Submitted by arsalanfarooqned on Sun Jul 17 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

205 words

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