You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter # Explain why you would like this # Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ # Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my concern about the advertisement for taking care of a 6-year child. Since I have seen

this

, I have been so glad that eventually, I found an opportunity to get some practical experience in nursing outside my country.

Moreover

, I will

also

have a chance to meet and spend special time with a foreign family to observe closely and learn more about their culture, tradition and language. I think I am perfect a candidate for

this

job. I have done my bachelor's degree in nursing and have a vast experience of about 6 years in

this

field.

In addition

, I achieved the award of "The best caretaker of the year"

last

year from the National Health department because of my responsiveness and decent behaviour.

Furthermore

, I looked after more than 50 people including from 6-month-old babies to 60-year-old people. If I get

this

job I would love to pursue some international course in nursing or do a diploma along with it to grab more knowledge.

Besides

that, I will join a sports club in my leisure time to stay fit and healthy. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Arsalan Farooq

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8 paragraphs

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8.50

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