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Student should be encouraged to work part-time. Do you agree or disagree?

#student #work
In
this
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students
stiudents
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students
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 to work
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part-time
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part
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time
. In
this
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 will outline my point of view
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regarding
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regrading
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this
 matter. To commence with, the students who are doing part-
time
 are more likely to unable to
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focus
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 in their class properly. The
predominat
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predominant
predominate
 factor that leads to that way is they lack sleeping hours as they are
hective
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active
 with their part-
time
 work.
Although
 it seems not a huge deal,
but
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the effect
to
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 the teenagers themselves
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 their academic. It is really vital for
the
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students
such
 that age to prioritize
on
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their
study
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first
instead
 of doing something that they will
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regret
for
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in the future.
On the other hand
,
the
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adolescents will face
a
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difficulty in managing their
time
, if they keep working as a part-timer.
Consequently
, they might skip the
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prominent
 class for a long period
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, as they are already
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blindsided
blinded
 by money that they get from
this
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. People, chiefly the parents cannot turn a blind eye to
this
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 it
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become
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becomes
 more critical. The teenagers should avail their golden
time
 to study not doing something that can
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procrastinate
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time
. In a nutshell, working as
part-timer
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 is not suitable for the students, as they must
to
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put their
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 in
the
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first
 place rather
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than
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 anything. In my opinion, it is not a crime to work as a part-timer, but sometimes it has more demerits
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tan
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 merits for
the
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adolescents.
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