Student should be encouraged to work part-time. Do you agree or disagree?

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contemporary epoch, a section of society holds a belief that the

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students

stiudents

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students

must

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to work

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part-time

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part

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time

. In

this

essay,

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will outline my point of view

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regrading

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this

matter. To commence with, the students who are doing part-

time

are more likely to unable to

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in their class properly. The

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predominant

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factor that leads to that way is they lack sleeping hours as they are

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active

with their part-

time

work.

Although

it seems not a huge deal,

but

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the effect

to

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the teenagers themselves

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their academic. It is really vital for

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students

such

that age to prioritize

on

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their

study

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first

instead

of doing something that they will

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regret

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in the future.

On the other hand

,

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adolescents will face

a

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difficulty in managing their

time

, if they keep working as a part-timer.

Consequently

, they might skip the

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prominent

class for a long period

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, as they are already

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blindsided

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by money that they get from

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kind of

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. People, chiefly the parents cannot turn a blind eye to

this

matter as

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it

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become

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becomes

more critical. The teenagers should avail their golden

time

to study not doing something that can

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procrastinate

their

time

. In a nutshell, working as

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is not suitable for the students, as they must

to

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put their

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in

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first

place rather

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than

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anything. In my opinion, it is not a crime to work as a part-timer, but sometimes it has more demerits

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tan

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merits for

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adolescents.