Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, many companies try to show their image via their
employees
' uniforms. This
becomes a debatable issue whether the employees
should dress smartly or not. Others suggest that we should value the quality
of work
above appearance. In this
essay, we will dig into both sides of view and the reasons behind each topic.
First
and foremost, as the business develops leaps and bounds, companies including small shops try to have signature clothing for the employees
. This
show not only their influence but also
to attract customers. For example
, if someone has daily wear in his office, that will make him less careful about his job although
it does not depend on what he wears. In addition
, clients will be disappointed and reduced trust because of the style of the staff. That is
why many companies nowadays make their employees
wear office suits.
On the contrary
, some people believe that the clothing style does not affect the quality
of work
. This
is true to some extent. For example
, people prefer buying at a shop where the staff are properly wearing instead
of buying at a shop with staff in random clothing. This
comes from people's visual desires. We always judge a book by its cover first
, also
the same for dress code. It can be argued that work
quality
does not depend on appearance but we cannot deny the impact of clothing in dealing with customers.
To sum up, it is important to wear properly for every employee because customer's impression depends on how you wear and then
followed by the quality
of work
you've done.Submitted by pshinnt on
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