You are moving home. Please write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank them for their help during your stay.

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Dear

neighbors

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, As you

guys

might already know, I

have

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moved out

from

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this

beautiful

community

and relocated to Waterloo yesterday. I would like to write

this

letter to appreciate how much I am grateful for

about

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your help. I remembered when I

first

moved to

this

neighbourhood, I was only a 22-year-old international student who was just about to start

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graduate school at that time. I barely knew anyone in

this

big city and my spoken English is quite lame. I want to thank everyone in

this

lovely

community

for all the help you

guys

gave to help a young student establish a warming home in a strange country. You

guys

helped me figure out how to pay my utility bills, gave lots of beneficial

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advices

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about home settlement and even invited me to parties to give me the opportunity to make friends. I just moved out yesterday but I have already had the nostalgic feeling. I would definitely miss everyone and everything here but specifically, the park in the

center

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of our

community

would appear multiple times in my dreams. I remembered how I made my

first

friend in Canada during a

community

BBQ event and how much delighted and wonderful time we spent there. After everything is settled up in Waterloo, I would like to invite you

guys

to visit my new place here. We could have a potluck buffet and watch a hockey game together as we always did. I can not wait to see you

guys

soon. Sincerely, Te

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

255 words

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You are moving home. Please write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank them for their help during your stay.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Most famous athletes sign contracts to promote/advertise certain products. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?