With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Question With the increased global demand

in

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oil

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and

gas

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, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree? Response

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of

high

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the high

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demand

in

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oil

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and

gas

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worldwide, undetected regions of the universe should be given access to the reserve

in-order

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to obtain more supplies. I believe

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will benefit a larger population and

also

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prevent some gangers;

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detail

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explanation will be given in

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essay.

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with, the

product

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should be made available and easily accessible. Fuel

availability

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enables easy movement of goods and services from one location to another.

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, whenever there is

scarcity

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a scarcity

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of automobile

gas

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, a journey of about 30km

cost

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costs

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up to thirty US Dollars in Nigeria.

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,

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availability

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the availability

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of premium motor spirit will prevent the

product

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from being adulterated by marketers of the

product

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. In an attempt to generate high income, some marketers mix fuel with other

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product

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products

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and

sale

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to buyers.

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, if the

product

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is readily available,

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ingenuous act will be avoided.

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, hoarding of

oil

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and

gas

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will lead to scarcity.

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is curb when other places around the world are open for exploration and refining of the

product

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.

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, crude

oil

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was discovered in

olo-ibiri

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in Bayelsa State, South-south Nigeria many years ago,

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this

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and this

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have

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led to

accessibility

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the accessibility

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of fuel all over the country.

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, illegal method of the delving of

gas

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often results in water pollution.

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leads to

destruction

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the destruction

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of aquatic

lives

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life

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. In conclusion, because of

huge

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the huge

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demand

of

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for

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premium motor

spirit

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spirits

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, undisclosed places within the world should be granted

privilege

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the privilege

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in

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of

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getting some quantity of the

product

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. Though hoarding of

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product

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will lead to scarcity,

but

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however

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its

availability

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and accessibility will enable easy movement of goods and services

as well as

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individuals. I

therefore

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opined that Governments at all levels should ensure

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availability

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the availability

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of

oil

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and

gas

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