With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Question With the increased global demand

in

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oil

and

gas

, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree? Response

As a result

of

high

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the high

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demand

in

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for

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oil

and

gas

worldwide, undetected regions of the universe should be given access to the reserve

in-order

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in order

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to obtain more supplies. I believe

this

will benefit a larger population and

also

prevent some gangers;

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detail

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explanation will be given in

this

essay.

To begin

with, the

product

should be made available and easily accessible. Fuel

availability

enables easy movement of goods and services from one location to another.

For instance

, whenever there is

scarcity

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a scarcity

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of automobile

gas

, a journey of about 30km

cost

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costs

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up to thirty US Dollars in Nigeria.

Secondly

,

availability

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the availability

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of premium motor spirit will prevent the

product

from being adulterated by marketers of the

product

. In an attempt to generate high income, some marketers mix fuel with other

product

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products

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and

sale

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sell

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to buyers.

Finally

, if the

product

is readily available,

this

ingenuous act will be avoided.

Furthermore

, hoarding of

oil

and

gas

will lead to scarcity.

This

is curb when other places around the world are open for exploration and refining of the

product

.

For example

, crude

oil

was discovered in

olo-ibiri

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Olo-ibiri

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in Bayelsa State, South-south Nigeria many years ago,

this

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and this

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have

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led to

accessibility

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the accessibility

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of fuel all over the country.

Lastly

, illegal method of the delving of

gas

often results in water pollution.

This

leads to

destruction

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the destruction

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of aquatic

lives

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life

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. In conclusion, because of

huge

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the huge

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demand

of

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for

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premium motor

spirit

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spirits

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, undisclosed places within the world should be granted

privilege

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the privilege

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in

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of

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getting some quantity of the

product

. Though hoarding of

this

product

will lead to scarcity,

but

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however

its

availability

and accessibility will enable easy movement of goods and services

as well as

individuals. I

therefore

opined that Governments at all levels should ensure

availability

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the availability

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of

oil

and

gas

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