Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many wild species are endangered due to modern technology.The
Zoos
have safety and protection for animals
,still
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,still
animals
are suffering in the enclosure and being treated cruelly.Although
they protect wild
animal, in my,opinion wild Add an article
the wild
animals
belongs in the forest and their natural habits should not be disturbed.
To begin
with, wild animals
are captured and kept in small enclosures in Zoos
.They are not provided with proper food.For example
, on average male lion eats 15kilograms of meat every day but very few zoos
are economically stable to provide the lions with such
a huge amount of meat.Moreover
,to boost their revenue Zoos
are even extending the visiting hours, which is leading to the mental illness of animals
. For instance
, giraffes are placed in very small enclosures so they are visible to visitors because of this
reason they are suffering from mental trauma and neck injuries sometimes as they try to escape.For the above reasons Zoos
must be shut down.
On the one hand,Zoos
provide shelter to endangered wild animals
.Fashion industries are using animal fur,tusks etc to make the
expensive products because of Correct article usage
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this
demand for animals
in the black market has gone high. For example
,as per studies hundreds of elephants are killed by poachers every year for their tusks.With the advanced ,technology many bird species are endangered,so bird sanctuaries should be set up in
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animals
can be kept and taken proper care in
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a zoo
zoo
under the guidance of the government making sure they are well treated.
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zoos
zoos
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animals
.In my opinion, the
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zoos
must be shut down so that ecosystem will not be disturbed.Submitted by gdvmahesh on
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