Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many wild species are endangered due to modern technology.The

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have safety and protection for

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are suffering in the enclosure and being treated cruelly.

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animal, in my,opinion wild

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belongs in the forest and their natural habits should not be disturbed.

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with, wild

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are captured and kept in small enclosures in

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.They are not provided with proper food.

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, on average male lion eats 15kilograms of meat every day but very few

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are economically stable to provide the lions with

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a huge amount of meat.

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,to boost their revenue

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are even extending the visiting hours, which is leading to the mental illness of

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, giraffes are placed in very small enclosures so they are visible to visitors because of

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reason they are suffering from mental trauma and neck injuries sometimes as they try to escape.For the above reasons

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must be shut down. On the one hand,

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provide shelter to endangered wild

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.Fashion industries are using animal fur,tusks etc to make

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expensive products because of

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demand for

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in the black market has gone high.

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,as per studies hundreds of elephants are killed by poachers every year for their tusks.With the advanced ,technology many bird species are endangered,so bird sanctuaries should be set up

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city outskirts to protect them which ensures our future generations

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a chance to see them.For these reasons only endangered wild

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can be kept and taken proper care

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under the guidance of the government making sure they are well treated. In short, though

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provide

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protection we must not disturb the natural habitats of wild

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must be shut down so that ecosystem will not be disturbed.