Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.
Dear Mr. or Madam.
I recently have
a
trouble Remove the article
apply
in
moving to Change preposition
apply
another regions
as Replace the adjective
another region
other regions
bus
union make Correct article usage
the bus
decision
with the strike.
It seems to me that it Add an article
a decision
the decision
Use synonyms
cause
some traffic problems. and the public Change the verb form
causes
suffer
a significant Change the verb form
suffers
Correct your spelling
inconvenience
inconvienience
.
Correct your spelling
inconvenience
Firstly
, it Linking Words
Use synonyms
cause
economical loss. Change the verb form
causes
For example
, salarymen can not reach their Linking Words
componay
on time. It Correct your spelling
company
Use synonyms
cause
production loss of company revenue.
More importantly, the delay of transport system Change the verb form
causes
casue
severe health problem. Correct your spelling
cause
For instance
, it may Linking Words
cause
Use synonyms
that
patient hindered by traffic Correct determiner usage
the
shotdown
. And it may lead to Correct your spelling
shutdown
shot down
life-threatening
Add an article
a life-threatening
the life-threatening
result
.
I think Fix the agreement mistake
results
Correct your spelling
government
Correct article usage
the goverment
goverment
should solve the problem Correct your spelling
government
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immediately
immediatetly
by financial assistance to the bus union.
If the result is not effective, emergency bus lines should be provided by Correct your spelling
immediately
Linking Words
third
party.
Thank you for reading.
Yours faithfully, Yohan Kim.Correct article usage
a third
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.