Write a letter to a transport office about a problem with the transportation system in your area. • Describe the situation you are facing • Why do you consider it a problem • What change you would like to recommend.

Dear Mr. or Madam. I recently have
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trouble
in
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moving to
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as
bus
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the bus
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union make
decision
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a decision
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with the strike. It seems to me that it
cause
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some traffic problems. and the public
suffer
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a significant
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inconvenience
inconvienience
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inconvenience
.
Firstly
, it
cause
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economical loss.
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, salarymen can not reach their
componay
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company
on time. It
cause
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production loss of company revenue. More importantly, the delay of transport system
casue
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cause
severe health problem.
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, it may
cause
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patient hindered by traffic
shotdown
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shutdown
shot down
. And it may lead to
life-threatening
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result
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. I think
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government
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
should solve the problem
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immediately
immediatetly
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immediately
by financial assistance to the bus union. If the result is not effective, emergency bus lines should be provided by
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party. Thank you for reading. Yours faithfully, Yohan Kim.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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