You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to express my concern about the wrong piece of information which is printed in your newspaper. Recently, I have been gone through an incorrect piece of news in the cutting of your magazine which said about the opening of the new amusement park in the town. I just wanted to bring in your knowledge that its construction is not completed yet and it is not open to the public till now due to some legal issues. Due to

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wrong piece of information, people along with their families are visiting our area daily which not only wastes their time and efforts but

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puts a burden to bear the fuel cost.

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, it will negatively affect the reliability and credibility of your paper. You are requested to correct it and republished the article so that folks will not be in any doubt of it. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Arsalan Farooq

arsalanfarooqnedSun Jul 17 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rectify
Misrepresentation
Tourism
Editor
Credibility
Accuracy
Local heritage
Fact-checking
Repercussions
Counteractive measures
Publishing ethics
Clarification
Factual error
Misconception
Authenticity

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