A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday. • Describe some possible disadvantages. • Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.

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Dear John, Hope you are safe and healthy. Just writing
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letter to answer your enquires. It is good to hear that you are ready to kick off your camping holiday. I promise you that you will fall in love with
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activity because it is an adventurous and existing experience. You will have a memorable holiday with your family members. Speaking of the preparation for the camping holiday, you may need to leave at least 2 weeks for it before departure. There is a very complicated process as you have to do grocery shopping,
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up all items in advance. It is very costly considering how much you need to pay for
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accommodation
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adventure
  • serenity
  • outdoors
  • refreshing
  • hustle and bustle
  • inherent
  • foster
  • distractions
  • cost-effective
  • unpredictable
  • wildlife
  • adequate preparation
  • physical demands
  • researching
  • campsite
  • lasting memories
  • mutual interests
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