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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governmentsto make it a leagal requirement . To what extent do you think lows are needed to make people recycle more of their waste.

Most
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 argue that
waste
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 recycling from home is not enough and the most appropriate method to amplify recycling is for the state to make it a legal need. I agree with
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 statement because by the
rule
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 the
government
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 can increase the efficiency of
garbage
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 collection and disposal and
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people
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 do recycling better with the low due to
fear
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 of legal actions. The most significant point to emphasise that recycling can do better with the
government
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 rules is that the effectiveness of
garbage
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 disposal and collection can increase with legally established programs. If the
government
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 can set up proper processes for
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, it will be easier to
people
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 to recycle their wastes. In the Kandy district in Srilanka
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, the municipal council arranged a timetable and colour code of
garbage
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 bags so that
people
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 can easily dispose of different
waste
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 with different bags on appropriate dates. Fo, example polythene should dispose of in yellow bags and handover to a
garbage
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 truck every Saturday. So
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 became a greater development of recycling of
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waste
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 in Kandy.
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, most
people
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fear
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 to brake the
rule
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 due to
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 of punishments and if the
government
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 make a
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 to pay a fine or other legal action,
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people
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 will be more concerned and care about their
waste
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 handling.
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, With the
rule
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 young generation
also
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 learn the importance of recycling if it has rules and they
also
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 practice
waste
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 recycling properly. In the UK
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, the rate of glass recycling had went up after setup a low that pays a fine, if not put glass
waste
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 into the proper bin. In conclusion, the issue of whether the lows are needed to make
people
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 more aware of recycling their wastes has become a debatable concern among many
people
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. I agree with
this
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 statement because recycling is more efficient if the
government
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 set legal rules and programs for
garbage
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 handling and
people
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 will be more concerned about recycling due to
fear
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 of legal actions.

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