Do you think that education and training should be completely free or it is better to require fully paid tuition? Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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.
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some people assume that it should be, while another part of society
consider
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that
trainings
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and
courses
should require a payment. I prefer the
first
option and in
this
essay, I will
outine
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outline
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both sides of
this
consideration. On the one hand, it s likely to be better if
tuitions
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will
be require
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to pay. Due to the profit from the
courses
, more experienced professors will be
attarcted
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attracted
.
Consequently
, the quality of the training will be directly proportional to its price.
For instance
, the best universities in the world tend to have a vast price for education, because of the
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quality
qulity
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quality
of
courses
and the number of qualified specialists.
Also
, fully paid
courses
looks
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like
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apply
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more attractive to
the
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people who want to become a teacher.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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