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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss views and give your own opinion.

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #work #country
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 contemporary epoch, the public argues that professionals must
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 in the
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 where they did their training while others feel that they should have
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 to
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 in another
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 if they wish. In
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 essay, I will outline both sides and elaborate on my views. To commence with,
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 who believe that these professionals can contribute something if they begin their career in the place where they did their training. From a positive perspective, the
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 can use their skills to boost the economy in order to compete with others developing countries.
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, Dr Amalina who was once a graduate student in the UK started her career in the UK
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 of serving her homeland. It poses a prominent to ensure these kinds of situations will not happen in the near future because the
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 cannot afford to lose these kinds of
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 anymore.
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, the right to choose the
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 is on the
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 themselves. It is not a crime to serve other countries as long as they can gain knowledge from what they are working on.
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, one can broaden their perspective and widen their horizon.
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, the individual can apply their experience to other companies once the previous contract with the current company end. In conclusion, there are several issues that we had raised in the essay to ensure better insight for
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 who desire to start their
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 career place. In my opinion, there is nothing wrong with both issues as long as
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 can
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 comfortably at the place they wish to
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.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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