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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend ?do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

#rise #convenience #foods #people #life #style #trend
Nowadays, industrialization countries have accompanied by speedy life and
peop le
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people
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 do not have enough
time
 for cooking and
usually
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,usually
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convenience
food
 help them, but I think is not useful for them and there are more disadvantages than advantages. In many developed countries living is fast and people need to
working
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 for a number of hours during a day ,they usually
use
 ready
food
 ,fast
food
 and do not
cooking
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cook
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 traditional
food
 or anything that
need
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needs
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 more
time
. Ready
food
uaually
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usually
 is fried and oily and they are harmful
for
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to
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 health and lead to heart diseases and
restriction
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restrictions
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 follow them may
occurs
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occur
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.
Also
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 you don’t
use
 all
food
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the food
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 groups that the body needs and for a long
time
 may lead to
lack
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a lack
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 of micronutrients with using ready
food
 or fast
food
. But with
convenience
 foods living is easy .
Convenience
foods
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food
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 is easy for using and usually do not have
time
 and we can have
time
 for doing
other thing
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another thing
other things
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 that we need ,
besides
 we do not need more utensil in the kitchen ,so a small kitchen is enough for us and so cost for renting or buying
apartment
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an apartment
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 is decreased .But cooking in our kitchen is
reason
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the reason
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of
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for
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 changing
house
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the house
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 atmosphere and changing
mood
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the mood
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 of every member
is
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in
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 the house and
effect
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its effect
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 on mood. In conclusion, I believe
convenience
 foods are not good for health and
causes
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cause
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 many diseases
in
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over
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the
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a
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 long
time
 ,and we should
use
 all groups of
food
 , but we can
use
 them
some times
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sometimes
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 we can not make cooking .
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